Reviews for Me against myself

The Intelligent Designer 2006-10-04 ch 1,	Hmm...different. I expected it to be funny, but I misunderstood something. It's still a very interesting way to write. Now, I must be stupid, but what is the object of the narrator's attention? I'm not sure...but I'm reasonably positive that you kept that hidden. Nice tone, nice rythm, nice piece.
Xerophyte 2006-07-26 ch 1,	Huh. When I first read the summary, I didn't know how I'd feel about it, but I really like it! The two sides didn't seem cheezy, so that was good. The ending, however, kinda left me hanging, and I don't know why. All the same, I like it.