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| Black Feather Quill 2006-07-26 ch 1, | I have to say- this was very short. Not to mention, the repeating was kinda getting annoying, you know? 'The stars keep me grounded' sounded...not so good to me. More words to describe how beautiful the stars are would have been better, too. But other than those two things, good job. I really liked it. BFQ |
| GeekyChica 2006-07-26 ch 1, | I love it! It's really beautiful. |