Bam. What a shot in the face that was. Really. I don't know if it was intentional, but that's how I felt when your poem took a turn for the... well.. not-so-good ending.

And I don't mean not-so-good in the sense that it was written badly. The complete opposite, in fact.

Will and Aidan's story IS very Princess Bride. Thats one of my favorite movies and I can't help but have some inspiration from it. Don't be so scared with Cinderellis, I'm leaving it up for now, so if you ever want to, read away.

AS for this poem, it's very sad. For some reason, it reminds me of a music box. I know that's weird to think of, but is seems musical to me. The words flow very well and it all seems melodic.