i loved this poem... it was amazing... its the best i've read

Loved it. It was quite a change from reading normal stories and I very much understood it. Lovely idea. Well done. ;) I wish I could write poem's as well as you, but my art lies in story writing. ;)

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I like the unbridled sensuality of this piece, although I generally am not a fan of vampiric poetry or fiction. Some grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing I'm sure you can't fix.

Delicious.

ower. seductive and dark and just... spine tinglingly yummy. (thx for the reviews)