OMG. I have tears in my eyes. This is one of the saddest things I've ever read. It's SO sad. I love the lines "My backalley baby,through crime-committing concieving.

-&- she criedm . u . r . d . e . r

as she mutated into another::dumpster-dying delivery."

That's SO amazing, those pieces, that whole ending. It's just perfect. That's SO sad. OMG. I'm so on the verge of crying right now. It gives a totally different side to stem cell research. You know? Ahh. I can't even like write a decent review. I'm too busy like reeling over this.

Bravo. Just Bravo.

This is so incredibly powerful and all too true. It reminds me of something I'd very much rather not think about (don't worry, nothing about me). Fantastic job with the formatting and the ending was just as powerful as the rest. It makes you think. It lingers.

this is incredibly powerful. as horrible as the subject matter of the poem is it's fantastic - very frightening and just powerful.

this is excellent.