I like this. I think you conveyed the emotions well--it painted a good picture for me.

This seemed like a well plotted poem. And a beautiful one at that. I really felt that the way you portrayed it was nice, and the slight sadness was apparent. I honestly think that you did great on this one.

This rings a very truthful tale, creating nice web of words, which makes this a nice poem.

hey you are the author of the week in the reviewers_found...
hehehe i love this work of yours... I NEED FREEDOME too!

Hey. Im not really into reading historical stuff but i liked this one. :) The rhyming was great && the shot itself had a meaning. Wonderfully written and the poem isn't marred in any way. Awesome!

- Hannah

Nice! I really enjoy reading historical works, poetry or prose. This is interesting, the way you portray the little girl and her personality. If I was going to give you a suggestion, I'd say the ending is a little... un-ending-ish. (See how professional I sound?) I mean, it sounds like it could go on. But overall, this really is a wonderful, and original, piece.

Aw this makes me sad. Not only because its a kinda sad poem (not to mention beautiful) but I feel like such a lazy arse, back in S.S. I'm sorry.

Man...I promise you, when 8th comes I'm gonna stop crying and be one of the smartest people in the class! >:3

hey i studied them a while back. i like the common idea of 'what you see isn't what's underneath' applied to an individual most would forget to put in poetry. very nice.