I hope you don't mind my honesty on this poem. I ndersdtand that this was supposed to be your personal poem, but I kind of didn't feel the emotions in it. To me, some of the words seemed a bit forced, but other than that it was great.

Again powerful words. Strangely heartbreaking, but also up lifting as well. You can almost see what is going on as you read.

This has very nice emotions and word choice. :) There are too many lines that I like to quote them here! Remarkably, for a rhyming poem, there are only a few lines that seem forced. I'm going to read some more!

aw. good emotional analysis of the stigma and meaning of tears. and i learned what a schnook was. XD