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Reviews For: With You Forever
Walking Catastrophe 2007-03-15 . chapter 1
It was very smooth, easily read. Good job on this one!

Cherry
yarrowicefrost 2007-02-20 . chapter 1
I liked it. Very to-the-point.
The lines "The battles we faced,

We never lost" and 'You helped me spark" were amazing.

Thank you for the review and putting it in your favourites. Made my day. :-D
LeilaX 2006-12-24 . chapter 1
Aw, a really sweet poem.
Mosaic Stains 2006-12-23 . chapter 1
A lovely poem. I like the last two lines of how they end with a final note. Bearing a hint of grief and yet that hope of seeing the person once again. And how you used the repeat line of 'With you forever' to a certain thought. The wording also helps add to the soft emotions carried in this poem.
Lady DreamWriter 2006-11-29 . chapter 1
Wow. Heartbreaking and powerful. I'm sorry for your loss. These kind of friendships are the rarest and the most rewarding. Your words are very powerful and well chosen.
TrueToMyself 2006-10-23 . chapter 1
Aw... so sad, so touching... I could never write something like this, even if I tried.

Breaking My Nails 2006-07-26 . chapter 1
I lost my best friend about four years ago... I still miss her. I can really relate to this. Nice, i'm adding to favs.
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