I liek the point but its a tad too repititive

oh my that was very good wasn't it?

I like that your tackling this particular facet that is a part of everyone - I doubt that i could do even half as well - very well done indeed

Kira

Hey this reminds me of the movie on disney channel lol its called read it and weep sorry thats wat i reminded me of very good poem though

hey, not bad! *claps hands*