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:) 2006-07-27 . chapter 1
superbalous!
Peppa 2006-07-26 . chapter 1
wow I love it,

I can't get over the first stanza-

I’m a captive of your smile

The ground beneath your feet

Pretending all the while

That I don’t feel the heat
anewcreatureinchrist 2006-07-26 . chapter 1
Is this written from your own heart, or did you mean it like you are mimickign others for writing about it? Well anywho it is a good poem.
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