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VexiVicious 2006-10-30 . chapter 6
Sorry for long wait... fictionpress went all funny for me and wouldn't load (so now it is i have 160+ chapter notification things - lucky me - guess what ill be doing until christmas lol)
I liked this one, enjoyed the flashback.. but sometimes Hotaru treated Rin evilly but there and now he's all caring + the flashback. X
ShadowFane 2006-10-17 . chapter 6
I loved the chapter. And I haven't been able to get on either, so it's been nice to be back and to catch up with reviewing. Great chapter! Hope you update again soon!

SF
ShadowFane 2006-10-11 . chapter 5
That's good. The chapter and the fact that you will update sooner. I loved the chapter. Update A.S.A.P.!

SF
VexiVicious 2006-10-11 . chapter 5
Glad there was an update! Plus love addmittance scene so it's all good.. just dont wait as long next time!
ShadowFane 2006-08-28 . chapter 4
YAY! You updated! Ok, I'm better now. Aw! And how sweet is it that he gave her ring? That's awesome! Great story. Continue soon!

SF
Twinkle Star Bell 2006-08-26 . chapter 4
Awesome I love it. Can't wait until the next update. The chapters are a wonderful length. They're not too long and not too short. Update soon. I can't wait for the next update.
Escritora de Tormenta 2006-08-26 . chapter 4
My friends call me Rin and I like to mess with people. Because of the character resemblence (among other reasons), I love this story. It's a bit too spontanious, though. Also, at the beginning, you didn't specify that this was set during present day. I thought they were in the 15th century, which, as you can imagine, made it hard to understand. Anyway, 4.83026 stars on this story and please hurry with the naxt chapter!
144 2006-08-26 . chapter 4
Hiro needs to get eaten by a mutant starfish or something, because HOTARU'S STARTIN' TO LIKE KANNA! WHOO!
144 2006-08-23 . chapter 3
Yay! I liked this chapter too! Was Kanna exaggerating or does Hotaru REALLY have a nice set of abs? Just wondering... :)

And as always, Rin never ceases to amuse me to the point of a wheezy-sounding giggle earning me many questions along the lines of "Are you seriously OK?" from the big sister I have to share a room with. Wow, that was a long-ish sentence...
144 2006-08-23 . chapter 2
No time for an elaborate review! Must get to next chapter! But I shall leave you with this: Aww Rin is so cute!
144 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
I meant to read this story a few days ago, but on that day I received the Gaston Leroux version of The Phantom of the Opera from the library. So when I got it I was all like "SQUEE GOTTA GO READ AND SEE HOW DIFFERENT IT IS FROM THE OTHER VERSIONS AND THE 170 GAJILLION MOVIES WHEEAHHBLAHPUKE!" and I completely forgot about your story. Imma sorryful.

But anyway, when I started reading this and I got to the part with the prince and his uncle I was thinking "Wow, this reminds me of an Avatar Fanfic!" but around mid-chapter I got over it. Which is to say, "It doesn't remind me of Avatar anymore."

And now for what you REALLY want to hear...I like this story! Kanna (Haha, she named herself. I wanna do that!) is most definitely cool for slapping Mr. Prince-man in the FACE with a wet towel. And I can't help but smile at darling little perverted Rin. Off to read more!
ShadowFane 2006-08-08 . chapter 3
Thank god you update fast, because I was about to throw a fit. ;) Great chapter. I liked the ending. :D

ShadowFane
cutebut3vil 2006-08-06 . chapter 3
i think your story is really good please update soon!
Aneedegorarose 2006-08-03 . chapter 3
Lol the walking into the same bathroom thing just never gets old. still very entertaining, and I felt a bit of pity for Rin near the end Because shes trying to be like her brother and her father (what an evil jerk!) and tried to beat Kento no matter what.. How old is Kento.. could Kanna and Hotaru get them together well I'm shutting up now, it's your plot and I'm not going interfer because it's awesome the way it is so forget I said it lol. Great chappie, Loving it!
XxAmberRomancexX 2006-08-03 . chapter 3
*grin* I think this story has a sad ending. Judging from Rin's dream. *sniff* Just a thought, but you're the author so you can always make a happy ending too! *hint, hint*
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