i like what this one says to me-Danny Dodger-

powerful and creepy.. like the title a lot

like always, your writing is completely captivating. "there is no happiness there." the underlining really defines your point.

firstly, this absolutely screams of something my friend is going through so i think i shall be showing her your page,

and second, sorry but the last bit of my review to your latest was not meant for you. ^^; it's what i get for having eighty windows open at once.

I like it. Not much more to say:-)

So stream of consciousness, splendid. Absolutely.