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nomy
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseyou've done great on this one..i got tears in my eyes from reading this one..but at the end you end it quite beautiful..so thank you for that..cant really imagine loving a fireman or policeman or any work that are very risky ...its just prove that they are strong for choosing that line of work knowing the risk and people that loved them back its just so strong.. to wait and not knowing their safety..ok ..im going to cry again..bye..
Amindaya
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseJust reread this and almost cried. Seriously. *This* close.
ILoveYouYouAwesomePerson
2007-08-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseUm...Nickelback, Nickelback! It's, er...Far Away!
I think ._."
Vera Dicere
2007-08-06
ch 1,
abusewell, you made me cry. and i've read this before, i know. not sure if i commented or not. but i love this story. you convey the emotion so well. lee is great. and i love how dick completely puts aside any lingering prejudices when he sees how devestated lee is over tols...it's kind of a powerful little one-shot you've got here.

and, in case you were wondering about the multiple comments from me in the past few hours, i'm going back through some of your older works [obviously]. loving them all so far! :)
Lady E
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseOh, my dear, if emotionally provocative was what you were going for, then you are wildly successful. I choked up reading this, glued to the sadness nearly vibrating off the screen, eating up every bit.

The writing style is also miles different from "Perfect Uncle." Combing through your profile, I'm seriously impressed. You're a talented, versatile writer, and I'm fortunate to have found your writing.
Lilith Blackmoore
2007-02-25
ch 1,
abuseyou got me to cry on this one. you are a fanominal writer. you really are.
ealuv79
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was such a beautiful story. You wrote it so well and it brought tears to my eyes. :)
nowhere-to-fall
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseYOur story gave me chills. My boyfriend is a firefighter and getting that call is my worst nightmare. I know how Lee feels at the end of a long strech just trying to stay busy so your not thinking about what he is really doing. Your story touched me, and scared me..lol. I thought it was well written.
Diablo Darkmoon
2006-08-08
ch 1,
abuseGeesh... you've brought tears to my eyes... it's good... I like it...
Ashye
2006-08-05
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good... it reminded me a little of Ladder 49. Have you seen it? It was a great movie but really really really sad.
Mya
2006-08-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseIf I was easily reduced to tears I would've cried. You've seen Ladder 49? That's kinda what it was like, it was saddening too. T.T I really liked Lee though. T.T
vspirit
2006-07-31
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is fantastic. like most of your other stuff.

i wanted to use the word bawl as well but then i saw someone else had already used it.

damn.
kimper
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseYou did an excellent job on this fic. I bawled my way through it. :)
Cookie Gestapo
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseEvery time I read one of your stories I end up crying.Now when ever I see you post a new one I make sure to get some tissue because I'm tierd of soaking my shirt.Lol.But any ways it was really good, as usual. A tear jerker as usual (or am I just that easy to make cry?).I can't wait to see what 'master piece' you come up with next.
Naomi Schemer
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseWow. I don't know if I could handle a relationship with a person who could get killed at any time. Scary...and sad. I admire Lee for that, I guess. Great story, very sad, as expected, though.
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