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| sleeping Pisces 2006-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseAt first I thought The Matrix. Then I read it again and it seemed more like a calculated effort to forget someone. The mind works in strange ways, and this haiku portrayed that very well. Daze |
| Basara 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuselike a computer inputing and deleting files? |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseExcellent portrayal. |
| Ellin Louise 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abusei like this. i'm thinking computers and modern technology in general |
| Meg Spalding 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseO. . harsh. Like it though. Reminds me of a LOT of people. meg |