So cute! Loved it.

keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

the ending was really nice ^^

It's good. I love smut! lolololol. "emo candy cane"...lol.

THAT ** ROCKED AN YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE MORE YAOI B/C I'M A TOTAL ADDICT!
your fan,
homesickangel

I was crying so h-h-hardd!! (and, still a-a-m! (hense the stuttering))
that was so good, I have a bunch of friends who are gay, and it breaks my heart the way society shuns it... so when they were both like... loving each other but afraid to admit it, it just... *sob* b-b-roke m-my heart!
*dep breath* AMAZING JOB.
wow, that was realy good! (and to think I clicked on by accident! lol)

That was so ** awesome! *dances* At first I thought I was going to cry, but I loved the ending.

Hi. Alright I can't believe I read that but for yaoi I guess it was pretty well done. That line, "I look like an emo candy cane was so funny, I almost fell off my chair laughing. So don't worry you did pretty goog at writing yaoi.

I was too lazy to sign on,A.R.- MistressELEMENT

OHgod.

This is a work of art. Oy.

o.o I'm speechless.

-Spira

That was NOT ** at all! That was ** AWESOME!

Omg.. Lol. Normally, I don't like to read lemons... but this one was more FLUFF than anything. =3 Which is awesome. xD I love it. Awesome-ness. Which is why I added deh story to meh favorites. =D!

Paper Cuts && Car Wrecks

I liked it, Poppy Z Brite at a slightly slower pace. I think you need to cut back on a lot of the description, there's just reems and reems that don't need to be there and it slows down what is a beautiully tender story. Obviously it's up to you if you do edit, but i think you have a real gem here and i enjoyed reading it. Good Job.

Peace out, kenzie