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| Shadowe Goddess 2006-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseoh wow... this is wonderful... sad but wonderful... |
| White is a Sin 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is really powerful! Ususally rhyming kinda drones on and sounds pointless...with some authors...but not you! Nice work *claps like retarded chicken* Thanks for the review...but i warned you not to read my love poems!! |
| simpleplan13 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseI love the descriptions and the title.. beautiful piece |
| fragileHeart101 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseYep, loving it still, even though i did read it like.. first hehex |
| Kristi 2006-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this poem... |
| Hidden Lies 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abusewhoever did this to you (as long as it wasn't me) deserves to be shot! but is makes for beautiful poetry, awesome job (sorry I am kinda doubting myself after that talk.. I just.. yeah.. I'll takl to him tomorrow) |
| method acting 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was so out there. I liked it. It was contemperary and detachable. It was nice. What a clever title too. Great job. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseJOSH! Stunning piece Josh, truly amazing. The second and third stanzas are especially my favourites! ^_^ Yay! *applaudes*, keep writing Josh! (Apologies, my reviews are kind of repetitive!). ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Jess 2006-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseas u know... "this is really powerful josh!! God u can tell by the words uve used!!" its really sad in sum ways =( =S dunno hard 2 explain... luv ya josh jessie-k8 |
| Jess 2006-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseas u know... "this is really powerful josh!! God u can tell by the words uve used!!" its really sad in sum ways =( =S dunno hard 2 explain... luv ya josh jessie-k8 |
| The Unforgettable Sound 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseWoah...amazing. I wish I could write poetry like you...because it's just so friggin' amazing. I like how it's written more like a fairy-tale than a poem...Ah, love it...You never cease to amaze me... |
| Nine-Black-Roses 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abusethis was sucha strogn and beautiful peice i can feel this and its so powerful. you write very well and ur words flow nicely. i want to thnk u so mucha for ur review, u have helped me to beleive in myself (person probs). so i owe you lots. i really do appreciate them. thnxx |
| Effie 2006-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really awesome poem! I really like your metaphors and the fantastical sense about it. Write more! |
| Alisha xx 2006-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abuse*applaudes* mygod this is brillant! OMG I LOVE IT TO THE MOON AND BACK!you should enter this in competitions :)mm very dark meaning behind it...Luv u muchly x |