This has some beautiful imagery, and I like those two lines in the middle. The rhythm is nice too. The only thing is, you can't be 'amid' a sky. You can be *in* a sky, but amid implies a multitude of things, not one big thing. Other than that, this is beautiful.

The beginning was especially good, but the stanza starting with "do you see your ignorance now?" lost some of it for me. The ending, however, was spectacular. The play on the firefly was the perfect closing.

~Elenive