i like this peice a lot, from the title i was expecting something else entirly, and was pleasantly suprised by what i found, it was really good, it had a nice flow to it, and just comes off like a piece of art, and it's also something that can be related to, loved it, keep up the great work, thank you for sharing, and thx for the review

Interesting and truthful. I like it. =] It makes a lot of sense.

I just grabbed a random poem off your profile... if I already reviewed this one, sorry, lol, I was looking for something to read.

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good. I like it. there's just something in the actual poem.

I can totally relate to this poem, it captures everything i have felt l8ly. I luv all ur stuff!

I like itit has a nice flow

Cool. I like this! Great job.

Pretty good, keep it up!

*::~Cat~::*

I like it, just seems held back or forced.

See? You can write. This was quite nice.

Watch the grammar a little, you're mixing up your "you're"s and "your"s a little.

not bad i like it

hmm, interesting stuff. it makes for an interesting read, I like it though. Nice work!

omg! that is so good. i can just hear all american rejects or blink playing this! this is just amazing.

and no, i am not just BSing you to be nice (sometimes yiu hafta do that). this is really good!

thankyou for the revews, btw. im sure everyone loves the incuregment (i know, i cant spell)

~nameless~

(sp) "sticky not" ?should be sticky note?sorry for picking on ya. Its a great poem though.

This is good. The meaning is strong.

This was a good poem, as always. I hope to see more from you soon. Email me!