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white to gray
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abusePookie--I love this. Amazing, amazing, amazing. There's so much to this that I love, I'm speechless. Honestly.

Excellent work.
Coruscate Corruption
2006-07-29
ch 1,
abuse:0

...Wow. I'm assuming it's a martyr fic. Very well done. I loved how you captured the emotion of how the guy is both distainful and and a little envious of society at the same time. And good rhythem of rhyme too.

P.S. Thanks for the review of my story by the way. I'm honored to be complimented by an author like...well you.
Edgar Wellington
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseWho is he? What is he?

This rings of Shakespeare, though I can't say why. Maybe its all the battles and the passions. Maybe its the use of the word "distain."

Throw us a bone, Pookie!

I love the rhythm and the alliterative phrasing.

Sigh..
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