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| Elaine 2007-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is an extremely well written short story. It brought tears to my eyes. |
| fullmetal_envoge@yahoo.com 2007-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was beautiful thanks. |
| Sukidayo 2007-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really sad. I had a cat who had to get put down, and though it wasn't anywhere close to the dog in this story, I'm sure she was thinking the same thing. This was painfully true and it brought tears to my eyes. Something so deep like this is just something that tells me that the world really isn't was it's cracked up tp be. It was very well written. But the paragraphs were a little long and it get a little tiring to read these long sections. But it portrayed the feelings well and colored a picture ot go along with the story in my mind. This is very well done! -SA |
| WakingDreamland 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, thanks for your review on my story Starry Night. I really appreciated. Second...I really love this piece. You definetly understand how to work the readers emotions. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading! Love Caitlyn |
| Alyra Myst 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good. I liked how it was from a dogs perspective instead of a person, because we humans really don't see things taht way. |
| MyNameIsMad 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseIs this one of yours too, or one of Robert W Kingett's? I'm guessing you're not Robert Kingett. Also, if you're looking for people to review your stories, I suggest not being so pushy. -Mad |
| likes to headbang 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseT.T this is so sad mang... it was so cute at first and then he ends up dying > |
| Seisaset 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseo my gosh that was amazing. really good. i love how you show from a dogs perspective and you show how loyal they can really be. wonderful writing |
| chibichan366 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abusethat's a beautiful story! i love it how you've written it from a dog's perspective! just goes to show how painful a dog's life is.please take the time to read my latest story "too late for regrets" or any other of my stories. thanks! |