This was excellently written.

Although the description of Nicholas Black would ordinarily be poor way of telling the reader what he looks like, it developed the character further because he does things with both military presicion and some arrogance and it showed when he described himself.

When I began reading this I thought it would be simply action sequences, and well written as they were it's not enough to make a story. However, the twist at the end has really made me interested in the outcome.

I'll be on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.