I really, really like you. Fabulous piece!

This wasnt like anyhtigns i've ever read, it wa absolutley wonderful. Great write!

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jora

Really wonderful - the first two stanzas are absolutely amazing, so full and skilled, splendid. The rest of the poem remains good, but the first two stanzas are truly the best and prove a wonderful read.

Wow - just wow. I love how this is written! Everything about it is just brilliant; your choice of words, the chosen rhyming, and the story it tells reminds me alot of Chris De Burgh's music (such as Spanish Train or A Spaceman Came Travelling). An absolutely wonderful job and one I will certainly return to read again!