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| Arcularis 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abusewow...this is very inspirational. thank you. |
| elisefey 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseI'm not very good at reviewing poetry so I'll just say that I liked this and the images it conjured. |
| Scarlet Black 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was a very interesting concept, and I liked it, but I think it would have been better perhaps if more character was given to the bones, if that makes sense? It would have been more interesting to read if like you said at the end, they were more than "just bones". |
| Jared DeVries 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem, i like it. it has a dark feel to it.. good job |