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| D.H. L'Orange 2007-02-05 ch 8,  | abusecool! there *was* more! i enjoyed these blurbs a lot! keep up with 'em, and i'll keep reading 'em! :) DH |
| Kilian 2007-01-26 ch 3, | abuseWell, this girl obviously know how to speak french. The first sentence is perfect and the second one is almost fine. But it would be better with the verbe "valoir" instead of "falloir" and au-pres is written in one word. So it should be: "Il vaudrait mieux rester auprès de moi". But it would sound better in a I-want-to-seduce-you manner to say: "Vous seriez beaucoup mieux avec moi" . Sorry, my pedantic self just broke free and well… don't take offense please. If you ever need help with french, just ask, it's my first language. And I'm glad to see we got more to the story. Good luck with your writing. |
| Totally Raven 2006-12-18 ch 8, | abuseAh, well you know I love your writing. And this was no excepsion. Rather longer than expected, but appreciated all the same. I loved the naming part. Very nice. |
| dreamerdoll-is-2-lazy-2-log... 2006-12-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseaww...very cute! terrific job! |
| multiples of six 2006-12-08 ch 8, | abuseThat was so random and cute and awesome. =) |
| Totally Raven 2006-12-03 ch 7, | abuseHeehee. That was adorable. Just what I needed after the nasty email I just recieved. So thank you love. Your writing continually amazes me. And I must make time to read your other story... |
| Lemon Delight 2006-12-02 ch 7, | abusee! |
| multiples of six 2006-12-02 ch 7, | abuseToo cute! XD |
| Totally Raven 2006-11-07 ch 6, | abuseI absolutely love you! You must hate me though. I've been away, and I've just got back and I found half a dozen stories here from you! It's shocking, I know, I really am hopeless sometimes. Anyway, back to my loving you. This was the chapter I've been dying for! And you just did it so wonderfully, it reminded me why I loved your writing so much to begin with - not that I ever forgot, of course. I still love Philip - kudos to Nadia - and David was just delicious here. You must never stop writing. I demand more. Unfortunetly, I haven't time to read the other stories yet, so you'll get my other reviews in a day or two, I expect. Anyway, just fantastic job you've done here. Lovely. Astounding. Words can not express how much I loved this chapter. |
| multiples of six 2006-10-26 ch 6, | abuseOh, that was beautiful. That paragraph at the end there just made me grin. And now we know how they met. That was awesome. XD |
| Lemon Delight 2006-10-08 ch 5, | abuseEh, I need to remember to check back on your story page instead of just my favorite page xD I loved the costumes they wore and David worrying about Katie's reputation. Endearing! Lovely as always dear Anya |
| Shadow 3013 2006-09-26 ch 5, | abuse*squeals* I loved the end of this chapter. I'm in a Halloween-mood now, which is lovely. *applauds* |
| multiples of six 2006-09-23 ch 5, | abuseWhoo, Katie! That Vicomte is an interesting guy. I wonder what'll happen. Now this has a whole plot of its own.. damn. Anyway, can't wait to see your new stories =) |
| Totally Raven 2006-09-23 ch 5, | abusePure genius... it gets better every time. I'll have to look out for your new stories... |
| Totally Raven 2006-09-13 ch 4, | abuseI've only just got to my computer, and yay! I found this! This chapter just made me feel real nice. It was fantastic, really. jsut very funny. Very well done. Did men have their ears pierced back then? I didn't know that. |