Magical. But I must say I was a little disappointed with how your rhyme scheme took a vacation after the first two stanzas. Other than that, this poem is pretty good. I like the repetition of "faerie"--it adds to the happy, magical tone. It almost reminds me of some of Yeats's stuff. Sort of.

J

(Thanks for reviewing my new poem. Sorry if it bothered you! I have been questioning my faith lately, and I realize that trying to figure things out will usually not help... anyway, thanks again. Very insightful review.)

Very cute poem. It has a bit of a light hearted "sing songy" feel. nice.