I can imagine Tea tip-toeing as she kisses Brendon, cute! I always say that kisses are so terribly cliche, but in reality, I love reading about kisses, even French kisses.

In my opinion, male toilets are far more cleaner than female toilets. During Level Camp every year, we girls would beg, "Oh please, can we wash the boys' toilet instead?"

Hey, I love what I've read so far! :D I don't know whether Tea's transformation will succeed or not, but I appreciate her frankness. She's so frank that she dares to confess that she wants romance, not friendship.

Please put the alternate endings up :D

Awso adorable!

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aw! short but cute!

Wow, this was great! Of course I want to see your deleted scenes, those are the best part of the movie and are bound to be a great part of the book. This was cute. It moved fast, being less than three days or so, but it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!

great story, even though it was short, it was endearing...can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Hmm interesting

Hello! This is the first short story I've read that is so interesting! :) Please repost the epilogue/lengthen the story though, it's quite... amusing. The way Tea is so naive and all; and she's almost 18? haha! x)

All in all a pretty original story, although there are some grammatical errors here and there. Great job! :D

Wow. this was so adorable. I think you should post the deleted things. I would love to read them

Cute Story.

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Very good story! I like happy endings too, and I'm glad you choose this one. Keep writing!

thats so cute. i love these long, four chapter things. short and not so stretched out..very refreshing :D

haha i cracked up when she was like M! was he like sucking her lips off or something?!? XP yuck

^_^ loving this so far. tea is so cute XD brandon is cuter.