|Reviews for The Cute Sophisticate: Rough Draft|
| Icyfire4w5 9/3/09 . chapter 4
I can imagine Tea tip-toeing as she kisses Brendon, cute! I always say that kisses are so terribly cliche, but in reality, I love reading about kisses, even French kisses.
| Icyfire4w5 9/3/09 . chapter 2
In my opinion, male toilets are far more cleaner than female toilets. During Level Camp every year, we girls would beg, "Oh please, can we wash the boys' toilet instead?"
| Icyfire4w5 9/3/09 . chapter 1
Hey, I love what I've read so far! :D I don't know whether Tea's transformation will succeed or not, but I appreciate her frankness. She's so frank that she dares to confess that she wants romance, not friendship.
| jayniee 6/28/09 . chapter 4
Please put the alternate endings up :D
| I Murder on Impulse 5/23/09 . chapter 4
| Dreams of the Stars 9/26/08 . chapter 4
aw! short but cute!
| cls81690 2/5/08 . chapter 4
Wow, this was great! Of course I want to see your deleted scenes, those are the best part of the movie and are bound to be a great part of the book. This was cute. It moved fast, being less than three days or so, but it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!
| Kathleen Moon 7/28/07 . chapter 4
great story, even though it was short, it was endearing...can't wait to read more of your stuff!
| LifeisCereal 5/2/07 . chapter 1
| vocecara 4/21/07 . chapter 4
Hello! This is the first short story I've read that is so interesting! :) Please repost the epilogue/lengthen the story though, it's quite... amusing. The way Tea is so naive and all; and she's almost 18? haha! x)
All in all a pretty original story, although there are some grammatical errors here and there. Great job! :D
| ST0PLiGHT 12/14/06 . chapter 4
Wow. this was so adorable. I think you should post the deleted things. I would love to read them
| angel1357 11/21/06 . chapter 4
Very good story! I like happy endings too, and I'm glad you choose this one. Keep writing!
| outsomniac 11/5/06 . chapter 4
thats so cute. i love these long, four chapter things. short and not so stretched out..very refreshing :D
| outsomniac 11/5/06 . chapter 3
haha i cracked up when she was like M! was he like sucking her lips off or something? XP yuck
| outsomniac 11/5/06 . chapter 2
_ loving this so far. tea is so cute XD brandon is cuter.