 Icyfire4w5 2009-09-03 . chapter 4I can imagine Tea tip-toeing as she kisses Brendon, cute! I always say that kisses are so terribly cliche, but in reality, I love reading about kisses, even French kisses. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-09-03 . chapter 2In my opinion, male toilets are far more cleaner than female toilets. During Level Camp every year, we girls would beg, "Oh please, can we wash the boys' toilet instead?" |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-09-03 . chapter 1Hey, I love what I've read so far! :D I don't know whether Tea's transformation will succeed or not, but I appreciate her frankness. She's so frank that she dares to confess that she wants romance, not friendship. |
 jayniee 2009-06-28 . chapter 4Please put the alternate endings up :D |
 I Murder on Impulse 2009-05-23 . chapter 4Awso adorable!
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 Dreams of the Stars 2008-09-26 . chapter 4aw! short but cute! |
 cls81690 2008-02-05 . chapter 4Wow, this was great! Of course I want to see your deleted scenes, those are the best part of the movie and are bound to be a great part of the book. This was cute. It moved fast, being less than three days or so, but it was a pleasure to read. Thank you! |
 Kathleen Moon 2007-07-28 . chapter 4great story, even though it was short, it was endearing...can't wait to read more of your stuff! |
 LifeisCereal 2007-05-02 . chapter 1Hmm interesting |
 vocecara 2007-04-21 . chapter 4Hello! This is the first short story I've read that is so interesting! :) Please repost the epilogue/lengthen the story though, it's quite... amusing. The way Tea is so naive and all; and she's almost 18? haha! x)
All in all a pretty original story, although there are some grammatical errors here and there. Great job! :D |
 ST0PLiGHT. 2006-12-14 . chapter 4Wow. this was so adorable. I think you should post the deleted things. I would love to read them
Cute Story.
H. |
 angel1357 2006-11-21 . chapter 4Very good story! I like happy endings too, and I'm glad you choose this one. Keep writing! |
 outsomniac 2006-11-05 . chapter 4thats so cute. i love these long, four chapter things. short and not so stretched out..very refreshing :D |
 outsomniac 2006-11-05 . chapter 3haha i cracked up when she was like M! was he like sucking her lips off or something?!? XP yuck |
 outsomniac 2006-11-05 . chapter 2^_^ loving this so far. tea is so cute XD brandon is cuter. |