Nice. I liked it

Pretty good- I guess. . .Short and sweet. . .this story (in the end) reminded me of that movie called "Pretty Lady" with Julia Roberts and Richard Gere. . .it's old and I saw it on TBS. . .But good!

Hum... so she's a prostitute.. Ok then. I'm curious to know how the story will continue!

At first I was like "he just wants sex!" but it ended up different than expected. Quite sweet. :) It needed a bit more background I htink. (More setting, time period, and such) I couldn't pick up ages and such and the prostitute comment was a shocker. (At first I thought it was a high school party) Definitely cute, but if you wanted, you could make it longer with more details and descriptions, although it's wonderful the way it is as well. May good writings continue to you. ~Moni