|Reviews for The enemy|
| I've Left The Site 7/28/06 . chapter 1
I really liked it! Just one thing. I think you should probably change the summary, 'cause even though I loved the actual piece, the summary had my eyes rolling. If its about Davey Jones, then it should be on , not here, but if its all you, then you should try to get more people to read it! Its awesome! So yeah, just a 'lil advice.
| benmin 7/28/06 . chapter 1
kool make another one like that