That was very random. It felt a bit wierd that we didn't know more about why Lewis was being chased by assassins, or why he thught he was. But I loved the whole oddness of it. When Will wakes up and says that the alarm is loud enough to wake the dead, and then just lays back down with "I guess not." I felt that was a strange reaction, but it made me laugh because it just seemed to fit with the style of the rest of the story. So random, but still enjoyed it.

I really liked that. I loved the oddness of the whole situation. The last line was a delicious and satisfying conclusion. I really like how you set it up earlier in the story ("That alarm's loud enough to wake the whole dorm, not to mention the dead..." and "Lewis, you alive?") Your writing is straightforward and serves the story well. Other writers might have told this story from Lewis's point of view, but I like how you chose the roommate's. He's an outsider, a bystander, to some secret, mysterious plot, and he merely glimpses one instance of it. I liked that for some reason. Nice job!

...That was...interesting...?

This is certainly something I hope will continue. Please keep it up with the wonderful suspense!

~Weary-Traveller