 The Fourth Fate 2006-08-06 . chapter 1Aw. So short and simple but SO much was said. I love it. It reminds me of a lot of ...things. Yeah. The title is cute. It fits so perfectly. I love it. Bravo. The ending was superb. |
 classic violet 2006-08-02 . chapter 1just spectacular and oh so gorgeous!
this poem is just so truly lovely & elegant. |
 randompoetry 2006-07-31 . chapter 1You are an amazingly talented writer. I love all of your poems. This one...wow. I loved it. |
 generically beautiful 2006-07-29 . chapter 1Oh, I absolutely love this! It's so, so sweet. Great formatting, as well.
♥Christine |
 InspirASIAN 2006-07-28 . chapter 1Wow...I don't know what to say...this was beautiful-and just what I needed... |
 Neaera 2006-07-28 . chapter 1You know what, I absolutely love your writing, you're going on my fav's list. Keep it up! |
 citrus scented 2006-07-28 . chapter 1this is just so ...god I cant really think of a word but beautiful and passionate come kind of close. its wicked, its got a great tone to it, and the images it flickers up are vivid. I love the last lines, they made me smile. |