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| SH 2008-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, Gavin and Cole are great characters. I hope a third installment does surface at some point! |
| The Aquatic Chewbacca 2007-01-27 ch 1,  | abusereally cute. i read the first one, Evesdropping, too, it's just that my stupid computer froze when i opened up the little review box, the stupid faulty machine. anyways, i liked this version better. Gavin is so adorable, and it's fun to read things from Cole's perspective. especially the way Cole views Gavin. i generally am not a fan of angst, but this didn't have too much. all in all, another great story from you ^^ ~kon |
| Lady Psychic 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseNice companion piece! Poor Cole, he had to put up with his close-minded family. Anyways, I hope you will eveentually post that third part. |
| lilylupin7 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute. It wasn't too angsty at all :) |
| Damian-Kayne 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this and the other part of the "three shot" maybe one day there will be updates to your other stuff ~DK~ |
| DH L'Orange 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe... Cole certainly is a pessimist, poor guy. i felt really bad for him throughout this fic, so i'm really glad that he got Gavin in the end... as always, loved your writing style! : ) DH |
| mechante fille 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseOh this is great! I really liked the first half, and this one is the perfect match. Poor Cole... I was shaking right along with him at the Christmas party. Horrible awful people. So glad that he dropped all his stuff for Gavin to find. I look forward to seeing part 3!! You know, whenever. I'd love to read something you are recommending. I look forward to that, as well. |
| kelseypaige 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI adore this! The way you characterize both Cole and Gavin just leaves me breathless. They're both so utterly perfect for each other. When I saw you updated this, I thought you wrote a continuation of this story, but a companion piece is just, if not more, satisfactory. I really hope you update soon (sooner than a year. :D)! |
| Serialcode A 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseOH LOOK A SECOND PART. This made me terribly HAPPY. Despite Cole being a freaking pessimisstic **. But then again I can understand why. I wanted to rip his family a new one, you know. Anyway. I really ENJOYED THIS PART. Possibly more than the first because Cole's reaction to kissing Gavin was just adorable. Adorably endearing. Et cetera. I'll stop. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE THIRD PART THAT'LL SHOW UP IN MY INBOX AND I'LL WONDER WHO IT'S BY AND GO LOOK AND REMEMBER LIKE I DID THIS TIME. XD Yes. Hem. Right. |