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Demonchipmunk 2008-12-12 . chapter 1
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demonchipmunk 2008-12-12 . chapter 1
I read your latest story (Tenebrism, which I loved)) Then couldn't get enough of your writing, so started reading the Cole Gavin series. It's fantastic and adorable. I don't think it sounds bitter as you seem to think, but rather a story that shows the silver lining in life. It may be a bit angsty (not in a mopey teen way), but the hope expressed in it gives it that holiday shine. I call it Chanukah spirit. Anywho, you should definitely write the next in the series this upcoming holiday. Or else I shall cry. If your feeling that that your lake of inspiration has dried, consider emailing me at , and I'll do anything I can to help.
SH 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Aw, Gavin and Cole are great characters. I hope a third installment does surface at some point!
Zoius and the Devil 2007-01-27 . chapter 1
really cute. i read the first one, Evesdropping, too, it's just that my stupid computer froze when i opened up the little review box, the stupid faulty machine.
anyways, i liked this version better. Gavin is so adorable, and it's fun to read things from Cole's perspective. especially the way Cole views Gavin. i generally am not a fan of angst, but this didn't have too much.
all in all, another great story from you ^^
~kon
Lady Psychic 2006-12-08 . chapter 1
Nice companion piece! Poor Cole, he had to put up with his close-minded family. Anyways, I hope you will eveentually post that third part.
DMLpacker 2006-10-02 . chapter 1
This was so cute. It wasn't too angsty at all :)
Damian-Kayne 2006-08-21 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this and the other part of the "three shot" maybe one day there will be updates to your other stuff

~DK~
DH L'Orange 2006-08-15 . chapter 1
hehe... Cole certainly is a pessimist, poor guy. i felt really bad for him throughout this fic, so i'm really glad that he got Gavin in the end...

as always, loved your writing style!

: )

DH
mechante fille 2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Oh this is great! I really liked the first half, and this one is the perfect match. Poor Cole... I was shaking right along with him at the Christmas party. Horrible awful people. So glad that he dropped all his stuff for Gavin to find. I look forward to seeing part 3!! You know, whenever.

I'd love to read something you are recommending. I look forward to that, as well.
kelseypaige 2006-07-28 . chapter 1
I adore this! The way you characterize both Cole and Gavin just leaves me breathless. They're both so utterly perfect for each other. When I saw you updated this, I thought you wrote a continuation of this story, but a companion piece is just, if not more, satisfactory. I really hope you update soon (sooner than a year. :D)!
Serialcode A 2006-07-28 . chapter 1
OH LOOK A SECOND PART.

This made me terribly HAPPY. Despite Cole being a freaking pessimisstic bitch. But then again I can understand why. I wanted to rip his family a new one, you know.

Anyway. I really ENJOYED THIS PART. Possibly more than the first because Cole's reaction to kissing Gavin was just adorable. Adorably endearing. Et cetera. I'll stop.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE THIRD PART THAT'LL SHOW UP IN MY INBOX AND I'LL WONDER WHO IT'S BY AND GO LOOK AND REMEMBER LIKE I DID THIS TIME. XD

Yes. Hem. Right.
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