As usual, you have put together two different ideas but somehow make them relate to each other perfectly. The analogy in your powm saddens me. Take care.

EB

This would make a good song, as a poem it's a wasted and i felt like i was reading song lyrics. Loved the rhepitioon of 'i'm flatlining' can really tell there's a story underneath the images and idea of a heartattack putting the poem into flow. Really liked the last few lines and especially the end 'even if it flatlines me', very abrupt and final, just like a heartattack.

Peace out, kenzie