Another well written poem, I like how sadistic you make him seem.

I really liked this, from the first line, I was completely absorbed. Great job. Bravo.
I really liked the chorus (word choice?), it really brought it together nicely.

The only thing I find a little off, is in this:
"He’s been on a heart-breaking rampage
And you’re not his first victim
And you’re certainly not the last."
I'm thinking only the second and should be there. It'd make it a lot neater.
Altogether, great piece. Keep writing.

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You described the false-charm of a psychopath well in this poem. :)

frightening.

this is amazing iknow exactly what you're talking about ive been there

I really liked this tbh. I've only read a few poems on this so far, but they were all a bit.. Distant. With this one, I could actually feel emotion. :D Keep writing.

omg i adore this poem...its great..i love how you put the words together to fit perfectly..and i think it told a wonderful story...soo great work!!

Wow, this is great! I love it! Adding to favs

Kristie Marie

I loved it. Definately going to 'favorite' it. :)

I liked it. A lot. It was straight to the point, strong, and while it didn't show a lot of emotion, you can feel it. It's pretty awesome.

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Another great one!! :)

That's a truly inspirational and intriguing poem. It makes me want to know more...about the lives the boy destroyed, what made him the person he has become and how the girls he's crushed moved on.

It's definately got me thinking. I reckon its the kind of poem you could read again and again, realising something new everytime.

Thanks for writing it. It's genius!

I really like this! And I think that I know how you feel! I really got this poem! Awesome.

It's probably just me since I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poems, so I don't love this one but I do like it. It's very metaphorical.

wow what a creepy piece. This would make a great dare I say comedic song? Well written:)