 SonOfPhoenix 2009-11-19 . chapter 1Another well written poem, I like how sadistic you make him seem. |
 RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur 2009-06-20 . chapter 1I really liked this, from the first line, I was completely absorbed. Great job. Bravo.
I really liked the chorus (word choice?), it really brought it together nicely.
The only thing I find a little off, is in this:
"He’s been on a heart-breaking rampage
And you’re not his first victim
And you’re certainly not the last."
I'm thinking only the second and should be there. It'd make it a lot neater.
Altogether, great piece. Keep writing.
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 Isca 2009-03-21 . chapter 1You described the false-charm of a psychopath well in this poem. :) |
 Renate Seline Zaz 2008-09-03 . chapter 1frightening. |
 BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-03-13 . chapter 1this is amazing iknow exactly what you're talking about ive been there |
 YerMaw 2008-02-15 . chapter 1 I really liked this tbh. I've only read a few poems on this so far, but they were all a bit.. Distant. With this one, I could actually feel emotion. :D Keep writing. |
 vampy08 2008-01-21 . chapter 1omg i adore this poem...its great..i love how you put the words together to fit perfectly..and i think it told a wonderful story...soo great work!! |
 XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-11-02 . chapter 1Wow, this is great! I love it! Adding to favs
Kristie Marie |
 anything-but-perfect 2007-06-07 . chapter 1I loved it. Definately going to 'favorite' it. :) |
 .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2006-12-22 . chapter 1I liked it. A lot. It was straight to the point, strong, and while it didn't show a lot of emotion, you can feel it. It's pretty awesome.
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 Sweet Persephone 2006-10-11 . chapter 1Another great one!! :) |
 May Hearty 2006-09-15 . chapter 1That's a truly inspirational and intriguing poem. It makes me want to know more...about the lives the boy destroyed, what made him the person he has become and how the girls he's crushed moved on.
It's definately got me thinking. I reckon its the kind of poem you could read again and again, realising something new everytime.
Thanks for writing it. It's genius! |
 DansMandy 2006-09-12 . chapter 1I really like this! And I think that I know how you feel! I really got this poem! Awesome. |
 Intrepid23 2006-08-31 . chapter 1It's probably just me since I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poems, so I don't love this one but I do like it. It's very metaphorical. |
 b-U-b-TRUE 2006-08-30 . chapter 1wow what a creepy piece. This would make a great dare I say comedic song? Well written:) |