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| BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-03-13 ch 1,  | abusethis is amazing iknow exactly what you're talking about ive been there |
| YerMaw 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this tbh. I've only read a few poems on this so far, but they were all a bit.. Distant. With this one, I could actually feel emotion. :D Keep writing. |
| vampy08 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseomg i adore this poem...its great..i love how you put the words together to fit perfectly..and i think it told a wonderful story...soo great work!! |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is great! I love it! Adding to favs Kristie Marie |
| anything-but-perfect 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Definately going to 'favorite' it. :) |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. A lot. It was straight to the point, strong, and while it didn't show a lot of emotion, you can feel it. It's pretty awesome. --STIXERZ-- |
| Sweet Persephone 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseAnother great one!! :) |
| May Hearty 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseThat's a truly inspirational and intriguing poem. It makes me want to know more...about the lives the boy destroyed, what made him the person he has become and how the girls he's crushed moved on. It's definately got me thinking. I reckon its the kind of poem you could read again and again, realising something new everytime. Thanks for writing it. It's genius! |
| DansMandy 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! And I think that I know how you feel! I really got this poem! Awesome. |
| Intrepid23 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseIt's probably just me since I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poems, so I don't love this one but I do like it. It's very metaphorical. |
| b-U-b-TRUE 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abusewow what a creepy piece. This would make a great dare I say comedic song? Well written:) |
| LoopyGirdlejuice 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is so intense. Your work is very brutally direct. I love it. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseCreepy, good, awesome, and the word choice is amazing. Wow. This is really good. I... wow. This is brilliant. |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseCatchy and almost song-like, nice rhythm and metaphors. Good job, keep writing and thanks for the review! |
| happypills03 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abusei absolutley love it i love the rusty needle thing totally awsome |