| Reviews for Tightrope Snapping Threadbare |
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Aquafied 8/7/06 . chapter 1i follow all but purple devastation. what is it? the darkest valleys are theones left uncultivated,-is that too true? |
arcane devices 8/1/06 . chapter 1Beautiful, as always. I enjoyed the longevity and the complexity of this piece. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san |
mizu no kokoro 7/31/06 . chapter 1wow, i love how this poem seem to pour out to you, overwhelming and making you almost humble. great job keep writing |
Chaos Apple 7/29/06 . chapter 1Expertly written, how long did this take you? Where do you get your ideas/inspiration? |
b-U-b-TRUE 7/29/06 . chapter 1This is written with a very intense tone and has a very dramatic mood to it, because you have raised the stakes through your use of metaphores and description the reader becomes very captivated! Great work! |
eldrin 7/28/06 . chapter 1Intense and carefully stumbling. A very strong piece. |
Halcyon Impulsion 7/28/06 . chapter 1What a painful and raw piece. The rambling feel gives us a sense of mindset. Tough stuff to write, tough stuff to live through, thank you for the reminder. Good work. |