 FunkyFlower18 2006-08-24 . chapter 1lol. i agree with you on the subject but then again, i would say that what every girl is, is what beauty is. it doesnt matter whether you have curves, are skinny or a lil plump> its all beauty because its all unique. ah well, i think you've got a point though ^^ great job:)
~mez~ |
 emeraude-irlandais 2006-07-30 . chapter 1So beautiful- this is interesting because usually the form of repetition (e.g. "this was...") falls through, due to redundancy. But, phrases like "domed footprint of rain", and "curtsy of a fruit-laden branch" capture you in the imagery, not the words. Gah. Your amazing talent blinds. `~bella~` |