I really like this one...very insightful. When the world is grim and so is everyone in it, all you can do is keep trying. Very nicely done. :)

I love how this poem is strung together, it flows so very well. The choice of words was one of the reasons that made it so great. Again, love it and again, keep it up.

I think this is really pretty. It speaks to me. I love how it sends a message of hope and of like...persevering I guess.

:-)

wow...excellent poem, it had a lot of meaning in it from what I read, and it was great writing!

"Life and Death And this is how it goes

The Good die young

And we're left to sing the songs unsung"

..songs unsung...i've heard those lines before, and i think they added a lot to this poem. Great writing once again :D and hope to see more from you soon! *keep writing!*

~Britney