Wow. Amazing story. The way you were able to get inside the killers head was so realistic. It made me feel as if I was really seeing things from his perspective. The actual murder itself was detailed very well. The only problem is at times the story was somewhat confusing, but other than that it was very well written. Great job!

Oh, my! i'm stunned. This piece is so... perfect. The suspense, the emotion, the description! i love it!