*blinks* Wow. I... like this a lot!

Had to read this over and over again like some crazy person before I remembered, "Hey--I gotta review and tell this person THEY ROCK!"

*calms down* Okay, well. I really did like this, in all normal-ness, and I think the format played a big role. But also your word choices (earthquake-conscience, tee-hee) are very original and interesting. In a completely good way.

So. *claps* My compliments!

This is wonderfully stunning. "her earthquake-conscience used to belch off steam"-love this.

Very accusing, very powerful. Just reading it hurt my feelings lmao (beware the guidacne counslers!)

Seriuosly, it really hit home as far as guilting the reader and sending that sort of message across from the speaker.

You have obeyed my order to write more. Good. Do it again lol

This is amazing! I loved the first two stanzas and the last line. It's great.

Ooh, I really like this. It's so angry and nasty in a lovely poetic way. I love the line about the train. It's a cool style; kind of ambiguous but the meaning is very clear.

oh wow..i absolutely loved this poem! Anyone in high school can relate to this in one way or form too..so I think thats also another way this is a great poem. Took you awhile to write and post it tho? :P only 3 years..not too bad :D (or is it two? well..yeah, i've never been any good in math anyway)

I loved the ending to this too

"Maybe you blinked"

wow...really adds impact to this...perfect ending! Great job! *keep writing*

~britney