Wow! This was positively insatiable, without a doubt. It was so sad, and I sincerely thought Kister was her husband - you did an absolutely excellent job. And even when I realized it was her pet, it was just as sad. Nice work!
Tragic, yet a heartwarming piece. I really enjoyed how you ended the note with the fire getting extinguished. This short story only alerts the reader that you shouldn't waste the time you have left by worrying. Keep the updates coming, hip! - ADD-san
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