This is really sad, but it happens sometimes. So true..

LOVE IT!

Aww...

Simple and sad. Definitely not a bad piece at all.

simple but yet meaningful! i liked this! keep writing!

This is a great read. The deep emotions are very well expressed. Nice work.

i love the repetition of 'in conclusion', it gives it a certain style within the poem that makes the reader hold on until the end. some of the phrases you use are just beautiful 'breaking dawn, fading night'.loved work.

this is really awesome. Your choice of words is perfect, and the format is amazing. great great great work.

write on,

-Em

I like the poem, but I think I like how it is written even more. The way the stanzas are broken up and the way certains words are stretched or italicized. It really helps to enhance the poem. Great work and thanks for sharing.

I like this.. so bittersweet and beautifull... love the ending

-sigh- The pain of heartbreak. Curse its strengthening powers.

Very poignant and relatable. The emotion in this is raw and true and sincere, which makes this a great read. Well done.

it seems like that happens to much.

do you ever realize, we keep more secrets than we know?

sometimes they care, but they just don't care enough...

mezzie :(

aww that was sad but beautifully written. well done!

Stunning poem. I can completely relate. Excellent work as always. Keep writing!

Anna _

Wow. There were a lot of vivid pictures in this. Beautiful work.