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Warg 2006-08-12 ch 1,	abuseHey.. Something about this is so catching, loosely gripping, then trailing, barely audible, but still there.. can't explain, heh. but it’s dark outside that window.and it’s a late-july almost-morning, but i’m cold. .. this is surreal, yet too true and the follow-up, how often.. shakes head And the ending strikes that final rining chord which resonates, echoing, smoothing out, dying.. This has indeed found its mark. A very touching read, stronger in its third silent recital than its first, but gripping enough to have resulted that many and more. Great work
citrus scented 2006-07-31 ch 1,	abuseThis review will probably take me a while, because this is such an amazing poem. It really, I mean really, struck a chord with me. I hardly ever can comprehend reality and sometimes it just hits me and makes me feel so dizzy I just want to scuttle back into my dream world. Anyway this is fantastic, because- well it always is- when you find somehting that seems to know where your coming from. "there are times when it’s frightening justto exist" ...so true. such a simple statment, but really it means alot more. "moments when i feel like i’m teetering onthe edge" ...and this describes the feeling perfectly. such a strong image. the images of the kitchen light and the laptop and the dark outside, and the july morning...well they really capture the atmosphere of the poem. and the ending, well, of course. it is always about someone in the end isnt it. You have such a simple but perfect way of putting things: "and…&iwishyouwerehere. (but,you’renot.)" fantastic.
Femme de Dieu 2006-07-29 ch 1,	abuseI can just feel the longing in this. Very good job of pulling that out. Truly, Tourterelle
Suicidal Skies 2006-07-28 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful and very poetic.
pleasecometrue 2006-07-28 ch 1,	abusethe sporadicalness of this piece is wonderful. Great write, I really like it.

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