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Full Stop. 2007-10-21 ch 1,	abuseHow positively morbidly horrifying. I love it. You capture the macabre in a eerily addictive way. Thank you for posting this, it really has given me something to think about.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-09-13 ch 1,	abuseMorbidly attractive. So dark and yet not quite evil. I suppose this is love best described from a primal perspective. Loved it though. Nice piece!
Dove 2006-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis...disturbed me. I think mostly because I got the most horrendous mental image at the "I sawed my tits off" part...You see, I happen to enjoy those very much, and the thought of them...well anyway. I'll never be able to look at strawberries the same. And yet, I really want some with some sugar sprinkled over top. Disturbing. One day, I will have you explain all of these to me yourself. But for now, what I get out of this is that everyone cuts you just a little. All for their own reasons. Even you. I think I read too much into these sometimes because I try to see them from your point of view. And let me tell you, that can be quite a challenge.
give me back my childhood 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abusewow. can you say grotesquely beautiful? (:
elvenstorm 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abuseWow this is very raw but in a good way. The images you use have a kind of shock value which really adds to the tone of the poem. This is one of the strongest self harm poems have read, well done x
Countess Chocula 2006-08-01 ch 1,	abuseThis poem is really beautiful, in a grotesque sort of way. It made me gasp a little. "or perhapscut a real incisionright down the breast bonei sawed my tits offi'm trying to make myselfsex less" Brilliant.
poetic abortion 2006-07-28 ch 1,	abuseIts grotesque in how you compare it to food - which, coincidentally, made me hungry - and then to something as horrible as this line made it: "slice me up like nazis did the jewish babies." So beautiful. So gorrid. So wrong. ~* Noelle

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