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| sleeping Pisces 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and this time with great imagery. I enjoyed reading this. Daze |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThe first two lines are excellent and very creative - not as fond of the last line, doesn't seem to fit. Nice haiku. |
| S0ULd 0UT 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseVery impacting. You do so much with so little. - Psyten |