I like your use of personification in the 1rst stanza, it really brought emotion into this poem in preparation for the 2nd stanza

Oddly attractive. It's pretty and simple and the imagery is nice. Good work!

Saxon.(reviwews are appreciated)

I like it. It is very peaceful and simple, but the end has a satisfying little twist.

You write poetry amazingly well. It's hard to find work like this anymore.

I love the line "and drank from the bucket of milk." It's such an odd, gorgeous piece.

:] This is going on my favorites.