Well, this was nice, but the flow was kinda choppy. Some of the lines were too short or too long, but it just might be how I'm reading it. Well, it was really good anyway, and took talent! Good job!

That was awesome. I like repetition and dated layout.

And if you think it's hot in DC, try working outside and in attics all day in Houston. Now you know why I got out of satellite work. ;)

HEE HEE HEE. I like it. "Love- the Sun".

Remind me not to ** the sun off anytime soon.

Just as funny as the first! Complete heat exhaustion... I like how that progresses through the poem. You've certainly got a way with words!

-- J.max

p.s. I enjoyed your two-liner at the bottom. That was priceless!

Haha! This is great. So true, too. As I sit staring at my computer screen in an air-conditioned room, I cannot help but pity those who are out in this ridiculous heat!

The way you told this was just brilliant. "Never satisfied with what you have, are you?/ Of course not./ No, you wanted more./.../Well, here it is!"... On and on after that... Your poetry style and your sense of humor are both awesome, and together combine for a hilarious piece of work!

But, I'll have you know - I didn't ask for this outrageous weather! Haha... Thanks for this one.

-- J.max

awesome! Washington DC is so hot around this time of year, is it? my mom told me that it is, but i've never been. anyway, this was totally how i felt here in washington last week. SO HOT!

~dragonzz~

Wow, love this! I like how it's a letter, only like a poem form. Awesome! and thanks for the review on 'the one thing'. you had the interpretation totally right on the first time. But whatever people want to think it's about is fine with me...rambling!

~dragonzz~

Haha!! Again, amazing sense of humor. The only two lines that didn't really flow were "I'd take just anything/anything!--to just get me out of" The double use of 'just' should probably be cut down to only one, I think the 1st one should be eliminated. (But that's just my opinion. :) Add more to your little weather records, i look forward to reading them! RY

Wow, this was great. Nice dash of humor, too. :) I tried to write something similar but, well...lets just say you absolutely kick butt! RY

Lol! Hilarious! And man, I just love the ending. At first, I thought it was just some sarcastic old twit hating the sun and all. But, meh, it turned out to be the Sun himself afterall! =D Awesome stuff. xP

lovely and so true in my family! I like that i can relate to it. Nice work! Keep it up! Can you please review one of my poems/stories?!?! Nice Work!

~*~*~Jasper369~*~*~