Ok so why did you post this chapter and then repost it with where you left off the first time way up in the middle. I mean why not just post a whole new chapter. But whatever.

in your own words. a-**-mazing. this is an excellent fic. and by far one of the more humourous ones. yes, i'm morbid. deal. good job and update when u can

kari konoko

hey this is real cool, keep it going cause i would love to see it turn into a story. ^^

Your very good at writing, you really should consider making this a story, I liked it alot.

Thank you guys for the nice comments! I shall continue then, the ideas frizzing in my head wont let me stop. Perhaps Ill find a sutiable title soon as well ^^

I like this, reminds me of a story a friend of mine wrote about one of God's henchmen who ** up on purpiose because he's never had a decent holiday. I think you have a good little story here, there's pleanty of room for a wider plot, keep it up if that's your intention.

Peace out, kenzie

omg! this is a fantastic start to a humerous, awesome story. i'd love to read more. dael has a highly amusing character voice.

Damn! This is a good story, for being as Dark as it seems. Continuing this story would be an excellent idea. Even if you get flamed by other idiots, keep this one, I like it. I like Hell, Heaven, and symbology, and this one kicks it already. Love it much.