It's quite good, Maddie. It went quite well with the song I was listening to. And it reminds me a bit of the song Train In Vain. But that really has nothing to do with anything. So, nice work!

Wow... spittful.

Idk what else to say.

It was good... I'd like to hear it to a beat, I'd be able to like it a whole lot more then.^^

Good job Maddie! KEEP WRITTING!

Good poem. It's well writtern. I know how that feels... and it sucks.

-Crimson Ara