Another wonderful story. I wish I could write like this. All my poems of love seem to repeat the same thing over and over. i'll keep working on that. Luv you LTO

hehe..sorry, your author note is very nice. hehe, you don't need it. Its obviously a very personal poem. But it is a beautiful poem. That is so amazing that you've found someone to make you feel that way. I wish you more wonderful times together. Keep up the pure poetry!

wow. brilliant. Dark and erotic. I love the line "Our dark, timeless affection,"for some reason. The whole thing is just perfect.Excellent job.