have YOU forgotten YOUR medication?
i like the whole thing, that was awesome. why was a llama in australia...and why do we say llama as LAma? shouldn't it be YAma?...nothing makes sense...

great story!
you're a piece of work!!

ps. you should really have rated this 't', you're suppose to do that if there's any swearing in it, aren't you?

“!” yelled Tess, not realizing that it was only punctuation.

ROFLMHO!

All right, I admit it. I laughed. I almost never laugh out loud at stories, particularily not stories on here, but I did. It was a nice break from all the serious, angsty work--flying pirates and all. I'm not usually a big fan of multiple exclamation points, but seeing how random this is, I wouldn't object. And it is very, very random. But that's what makes it a fun story. There were a few minor grammar mistakes, missing commas once, I believe, but other than that, completely clean, so to speak. Thanks for the laugh--it's hard to get a good chuckle on here, but I do believe this just did it.

yay! I love it. It comes out of nowhere and, even though I have just comsumed a lot of chocolate and some raisins (how DOES one spell that word?) I was laughing and very ammused by it (more so than before). So where DID this idea come from? it's very bizzar, and I haven't yet read the opening authors note, does that explain it? oh well anyways, very enjoyable! :)

lirem

This was actually quite entertaining! It was very much in the spirit of randomness. Good job! Maybe there could be a sequel with some more characters (if you're interested). I suggest the introduction of "I'm not a man, I'm a Roman girl!" That would be really funny and really random, especially to people who don't know the inside joke. Yay.

You just made me laugh in an Internet cafe in France. And now all these French people are staring at me. =(

Okay, I am lying.. I was laughing but they were polite & did not look. Or maybe they did but I was too caught up in the story to notice!

French keyboards really suck by the way. If I typed that normally it would say: French keyboqrds reqlly suck; by the zqy:

And I have not been able to find the single quote mark, which is why I have not used any contractions. But anyway!! Awesome awesome story, except I did not know who Link was. But my sister told me. =)

Your ability to make no sense but be hilarious at the same time astounds me. Great job, Mia!

I have to agree. Your flying pirate IS better. Perhaps I should do something to change that? *runs off to plot evilly*THE PENGUINS OF DOOM ARE COMING!Bwahahahaha, I'm horrible.SEA

This was...something I would write. If it makes you feel any better, I'm probably ten times weirder then you are. :) This was amusing, and confusing. But the amusin overpowered the confusing, so it was good. Can't wait to see you on Saturday. Or at least I THINK my dad said you were coming over this Saturday. Maybe I'm just delusional. Oh wait, I AM delusional. :)

ciao

o my god! that was amazing! did you really forget to take your medicine? or was that just a random addition?? that was great!