Fught club!

Its a letle bit scary. But very very good."Scars shaped like lips.

Two minutes later, she would have realised he is crying."

Oh wow ... a little... um dark but still very good!

Is this a poem? Or short - very short - Story? I loved how you picture every little thing. The story develops very quickly. You mixed both characters history in one-liners. In the end I don't quite understand the prupose of the whole story in a whole. Good nevertheless. Jesse Pelletier

It's dark, this one. Very nicely done. I like the matter-of-fact statements, such as "His eyes are blue." They do a lot for the structure of it all. The title is good too. It's hard to classify, though. It's not really one of your stories, the style is different, more like your poems, but it's not so much a poem either. Seems to be something of your poetic style, in a longer form... anyway, I'll stop rambling now. A good piece, I enjoyed it.

Scrunchy

there's a Fight Club reference in there... you should probably give the movie credit for it. otherwise, pretty good.